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0:11@isabelv:Hi! I submitted my essay and was wondering if you could go over it.
0:13@isabelv:I submitted the form for the essay. It is my common app essay prompt #5.
0:15@Prsnt:when will the stream start?
0:23@riya_2022:Did the live start??
0:25@Nidhyati:Has the sessions started? I dont see anything in livestream yet. Thanks
0:28@fani:Hi, can you do mine first? I have to leave in a little bit and really wanted your advice.
2:27@unior:Hello Elias :)
2:29@maria_sukhomlinova:I'm sorry, but can anyone else see the video?
6:45@collegebound22:what is the name we should search for the youtube channel?
6:52@unior:Could you review my essay (it's my ED essay)?
It's a small (300 word) supplemental essay– X College community is characterized by engagement, inclusion, and collaborative partnerships........
8:57@Gleb:It's 649, and the essay is mutliple paragraphs. That might just be typeform
25:36@Gleb:Thanks Elias :)
25:39@Daniel_lance:Is it possible to get a list of the essays that will be reviewed?
26:07@collegebound22:Why not just write as we speak? I don't understand the need to use such formal "big word" language.
26:17@gsharmss19:Hi I'm not sure if you got my message since my network is lagging, but I wanted to ask if it would be possible for you to review my Why NYU? essay, thanks!
26:41@Ducat:Glen it seems you reorganized your priorities and realized what motivates you—family. Now you found proper balance in personal and professional life
27:04@unior:Since you're going to do it first come first serve (totally understandable btw!), can you scroll through the essays you're going to cover tonight?
27:21@Nidhyati:1st come 1st serve
27:31@hocuspoquis:I think that random would probably keep more people in the livestream!
27:39@CollegeEssays246:It would be unfair for kids who weren't able to submit the form early
27:43@unior:I prefer that you do my essay (jkjk) 😂
First come first review is good because it's fair.
27:47@Nidhyati:1st come 1st serve is only fair
28:57@collegebound22:wasting time voting! lol
31:38@unior:Guys, tap <Shift+Enter> to add spaces between each and every one of your paragraphs in Typeform. I do it every time I submit :)
[This is for Windows. IDK how it works for Mac.
36:31@Felicitas:can you do a school specific one next?
36:33@taruschirag:do admission officers read the essays just like you are right now, or just speed read super fast
36:46@collegebound22:yes, a palette
36:57@diana:I think it could be both
44:30@collegebound22:I was wondering the same thing as @taruschirag. Is this how the admission folks read the essays or do they just read them?
44:30@diana:I feel like so far, I haven't really learned a lot about the applicant. I feel like this is more focused on the narration instead of reflection and growth.
49:48@collegebound22:got it! Thank you. I appreciate your help!
50:43@cguan:Hey, I'm a cellist and applying to colleges/conservatories as well :)
51:38@diana:No, we love you Elias!
52:15@collegebound22:We can learn something from your reviewing any essay, it doesn't have to be our own. Thank you.
52:18@Wenjie:Do you know anyone do double major in music and science at Northwestern?
64:10@unior:I rated it 5 starts because I don't want you to lose your job /(joking)
I find these live streams really helpful. It truly deserves 5 stars :)
64:21@collegebound22:the line wrapped around the store.
64:24@Csmithson:Do you think there are essays where it would be more appropriate for it to not be a narrative?
66:00@shodes:Love ur style - how about general guidance on use of ‘the’ as in ‘The sunbeams’ or “I” all the time
66:40@meredith0014:As someone who is deaf, this sort of sounds like pitying deaf people
72:10@Wenjie:When writing college essays, is it generally true that the less is more? I mean to be concise.
72:26@Casino55:I unwittingly was rude to a deaf person at a checkout. He gestured for me to lower my mask so he could read my lips to understand. I did then pulled up my mask. Tgen he asked me another question but I forgot to pull down my mask. I realized my mistake & lowered the mask again. We got done with the transaction & both smiled at the episode. He taught me something.
73:11@unior:Will this Livestream happen next week?
74:07@Wenjie:My son is preparing piano audition right now. Any words of wisdom?
77:47@diana:Thank you, Elias!! Good luck everyone
77:50@Csmithson:Do you have any tips for the unique UChicago essay?
77:59@unior:I feel like going for a run before a public performance helps my nerves (it's scientifically proven)
79:09@Wenjie:Thank you so much!
79:11@sssss:if I am mentioning some unique places or vibes regarding my university, will the Addimssion officer understand the mentioned signs regarding the university between the essay lines?
80:24@Wenjie:Good luck with your conducting!