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0:23@fani:Did this stream start yet
2:10@fani:If I write a whole essay on an extracurricular, should I not include that extracurricular on the UC app? Because in the description section of the UC app, they tell you to elaborate on what you did and what you learned and that's already covered in my essay
2:47@fani:in the extracurricular section i mean
3:12@adityaraj:How do i submit the essay to you?
23:02@anna14:i copied and pasted from google docs and it looked like it kept the spacing
23:09@summerorbanwrites:After I submitted my essay a reload button appeared on Typeform and then I was led to fill out the form again so I didn't know if there was an error or not?
29:32@summerorbanwrites:Pomona was mine, sorry I didn't know what was going on with the form.
30:30@adityaraj:I submitted a purdue essay...could you review that please :)
31:31@Isaaacsaadi:Does your essay have to appear on screen (plagiarism concerns)?
38:55@anna14:to whoever wrote this essay...i love po too
39:03@Divdhingra:Could u review my UC PIQ #1?
39:07@fani:Can you review the one that starts with “The Office of Admissions actively seeks out”?? Thank you :))
39:19@Isaaacsaadi:It's just the Harvard ec and the personal statement essay
39:31@ImHarry:I submitted the CommonApp essay, it would be really helpful to get some feedback, pwease :)
39:40@summerorbanwrites:I think a stream or so on the weekends sounds nice, especially for those who have a lot of homework or extracurriculars during the schoolweek!
40:02@anna14:would be cool if you did mine, it starts with Anna14 in the title :)
40:29@anna14:yeah weekend streams work best for me
47:42@Divdhingra:I had multiple paragraphs
it's just typeform ig?
53:39@fani:Maybe “the intricate nature of”
53:43@fani:The intricate nature of Bhangra
53:45@Divdhingra:two separate paragraphs
"Bhangra: it's intricateness..."
53:50@Divdhingra:5678 is it's own paragraph
55:32@Divdhingra:it was my first year in the position as Captain
57:15@Divdhingra:Should I delete the "From this I realized...WeCanCode" Paragraph?
57:23@fani:Can someone tell me how to make the spacing work? Because it never works when I just copy and paste. I’ve even tried leaving spaces between the paragraphs but type form gets rid of them.
60:58@fani:Question: what is a word you would use to describe a new book smell
61:04@ImHarry:Mine is the CommonApp under the MIT essays, could you read it?
61:19@fani:I mean the prompt starts with “The Office of Admissions actively seeks out” because I think that’s what shows up on your screen :)
61:20@fani:It’s pretty short
61:24@fani:Yeah weekend streams work best for me also
61:26@Isaaacsaadi:can you do my harvard extracurricular essay by chance?
62:21@summerorbanwrites:New book smell: Bibliosmia
62:28@anna14:i submitted mine w/ a google drive link :)
67:20@Isaaacsaadi:It's a pageant that honors Waco's (huge slave city) "history"
67:32@fani:Thank you summerorban and Anna!!
67:35@erenyesam:can i send my personal statment ?
69:35@anna14:just to let you know, idk if its intentional -- the essay isn't on the screen
78:01@anna14:*your umich.edu email
78:06@anna14:i just sent you access, it went to your umich.edu program :)
78:08@fani:Thank you so much!!
78:10@anna14:maybe refresh to see new submissions?
78:12@fani:Well technically you spent three years at TCNJ and four at another medical school that’s why I said 3
80:05@fani:Your troop leader is lame for that comment smh
85:10@anna14:yeah i left the troop LOL
85:11@anna14:nah it was just a metaphor saying that i tried to dissociate myself from my culture
86:40@fani:I’ll give the troop leader a talking to 😤
87:24@ImHarry:Can you read mine next :)
87:27@Divdhingra:Do you have a good synonym for share (as in sharing an experience)?
87:33@anna14:thank you for the feedback :))
89:03@summerorbanwrites:Sharing an experience: Relatable, Understandable, Sympathizable
92:14@anna14:sharing an experience: maybe verb-ing together? like you laughed together or danced together
92:19@anna14:I LOVE WHOEVER SUBMITTED THIS
92:21@fani:Summerorban you have good taste love Taylor swift
92:27@anna14:omg taylor swift fans unite
93:42@summerorbanwrites:Aww thanks Fani!
95:10@summerorbanwrites:Thank you again for the reviews, super helpful as always!
95:16@fani:Omw to listen to the lakes
95:24@anna14:what makes a strong conclusion to an essay?
98:13@ImHarry:Good night :)